I actually made an entirely new drawing for this instead of using your drawing. I referenced it, though. Especially for the background. I hope it came out okay and if you want me to change anything please tell me!
101st vector (I'll be using numbers from now on >u<).
Looks very good! There are some things that don't look right to me though. Her eye extends very far down on the right side where it should probably stop at about the same point as the left side. One of her tail's stripes I guess you could call it got cut off, possibly from another layer. You'll notice it once you see it, it's the main stripe down her tail. I was also hoping you would have kept her eyes open like my reference picture. The strings that hold the balloons to her are ok, but I feel like it would have been better had you made them go straight to the balloon because they are in tension so they would be pulling straight since they aren't zero-force members. (Sorry if that sounded complicated.) Btw are you still taking commissions? I might have another one for you if you are
Thank you! Someone pointed that eye thing earlier, I'll be sure to fix it and make it open. I didn't notice the tail until now. Inkscape does that sometimes, I have no idea why. It's not a layering issue though. I'll definitely change the balloon strings. Thank you for pointing all of this out for me!